Monday, September 22, 2008

MY ESSAY

I started working on my personal narrative more than a week ago. I really took my time to write it. I had to cast back about 10 years ago to re-live my best day ever. It was my first day in Secondary School.
Looking at my completed work now, I believe that I deserve an A because the essay had been written and re-written several times. I had to spend hour working on it, hours that I could have used sleeping or reading my other courses but I kept everything else aside and focused totally in writing a perfect personal narrative. I took time to correct my grammatical errors, punctuation errors etc.I am very proud of my work and I believe this is one of the best essays I have written ever. A big thank you goes to my instructor and my peers who helped me through it.
Nothing can come out perfect, my mum always says and this saying also applies to essays too. I am still concerned about my use of grammar like my sentence structure and punctuations especially my use of comma and full stop.
Overall I know I performed above average.

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